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a portrait together with a character overall design i have done recently
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~saevusWinds Aug 2, 2012  Student General Artist
The piece seems really busy. I would get rid off the mix-match skirt-shirt and just make it a full dress using the bottom piece. I would also remove the scarf, at least for this outfit. The gloves and the boots don't exactly match quite right. I have a question about the gloves--do they make the blue fire stuff, or is it her hands? If it is the latter, I would get rid of the gloves. The right leg is very stiff and unnatural looking. The other one looks small and deformed. The hip isn't drawn right to make the legs believe-able. You just need some editing there. I LOVE how you shade, light, and color. You are very talented in that area. I would, however, research about making believe-able and not overdone characters. Just to keep you on track. Overall, pretty good.
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*DigitalMake Aug 2, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
yes i am aware of it too. that is my work a year ago. i am making myself to improve more ya know.
really thank you for your comment . it very good u point out all the bad stuff. thx!
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~saevusWinds Aug 3, 2012  Student General Artist
No problem! I am so glad to help!
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